Reflection 1.1

Some of the things that I am happy with about my first draft is that I have a lot of detail and examples to back up what I have to say. Another thing that I am content with is that the analysis seems to flow and does not lose the reader, staying on subject. The things I would like to work on with my draft are making sure I am using the right wording and lingo that a rhetorical analysis needs in correct spots. Also, I want to make sure that the reader knows when I am talking about the rhetorical appeals without actually mentioning them directly while also making sure the examples of rhetorical appeals actually fit with the right one.